Sunday 18 October 2009

Update to Story and Initial Thumbnails


So the story has changed slightly to address some issues both narratively and technically.

The man is motivated by hunting the phoenix. In attacking the phoenix it crashes into his ship and sends out of the sky. Additionally the phoenix uses its last energy to save the man when he falls of the ship, and protects him when he hits the ground. It is in this instance that the phoenix ash comes down and causes a new phoenix to arise from within the man. This means that the ship is never seen crashing and the phoenix and man 'fuse' at the same time. (Previously the
phoenix would have been left in the air) I think the changes also add to a higher pace story.



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